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Join Date: Jul 2012
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# 35
02-08-2013, 09:30 AM
@ Shevet: Wow, best entry yet Really nice little mystery story there, I was engrossed all the way through, never once scan reading A couple of points though... Firstly, I think Amanda Palmer and Tylha Shohl would have an interesting debate on the ethics of replicating money Secondly, I'm guessing from his name and religious exclamations, that Pete was Irish-American, although his use of 'Miss Teela', sounded rather African-American, but that is my only real point of critique. A well-rounded character, and the little cross-cultural confusions read smoothly and well, rather than obvious and clumsy