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Rihannsu
Join Date: Jul 2012
Posts: 209
# 77
02-15-2013, 07:07 PM
@ marcus

As usual, ty For the suggestion Looking back over my story, I would definatly have to agree with you that it doesn't quite flow right. Of course I was usually writing these late at night, so that was probably not conducive to my writing .

EDIT: Adding some links for the music I used:

Color the Sky: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CveV2gkTj64
The Collector Base: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UFf60ECWpzU
The Normandy Reborn: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aXCM0lZxh4U
Jump Drive: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NGWYQY-EEnw
In Your Arms: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CRQCXPXL4Os
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