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Rihannsu
Join Date: Jul 2012
Posts: 216
# 88
02-16-2013, 06:50 PM
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Originally Posted by marcusdkane View Post
You're very welcome, it was the one thing which didn't quite flow, but other than that, a fine entry I know what you mean though, I've lost count of the amount of times I've written something, then re-read it and seen something that needed revision

On another note, I was wondering if you saw the Academy Days addition I posted last week, and had any thoughts on it? CmdrScarlet had asked about Captain Palmer's near expulsion from the Academy, so I decided to write it up
Yea, I did see it actually. Quite a good read, as usual Which gives me an idea to write an entry on how Bryan and Ibalei met at the academy...
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