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Captain
Join Date: Jul 2012
Posts: 873
# 90
02-16-2013, 07:13 PM
Well, Wraith, you definitely took my challenge to write dialogue and ran with it!

I could hear the tone of everybody in that room just perfectly (and as individual, distinct personalities), and I think my favorite moment was Wraith finally asking what I'm sure every reader must've had on their mind: how that virulently racist, maladjusted Johnson actually had a job.

I wonder if the evidence of this stunt will get Johnson fired? Which will then lead to his going rogue, which will set up the whole causality loop...
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