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Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 4
# 2
02-17-2013, 12:35 AM
So I just played this episode. I am greatly enjoying the series so far but there is one bit of criticism I have for it.

There are so many characters and names that a lot of the time I can't follow what is really going on with the plot as well as I feel I should.

I'm not sure what to do to remedy this aside from removing some characters. For instance, maybe some of the fighter pilots could be subtly removed since they aren't as important as some other characters to the storyline.

Just a thought. Overall, this series is very enjoyable. Nice work!