Literary Challenge #39 Discussion Thread
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Join Date: Jul 2012
02-20-2013, 07:47 PM
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Two in favor, no opposition, the vote is cast...
The entry is updated...
I hope folks will like it... As before, kudos and bragging rights to the first person to identify the series which Eleven of Twelve's designation is a tip of the hat to
Your story was very good.
"The Risan porno star?"
No explanation necessary.
Least favorite line:
"What was your position aboard the Kumari?" she enquired, taking the PADD which Kincaid offered her, and glanced at the screen, and the cheerful, auburn-haired officer upon it, considerably different to the statuesque elegance which the Royal Protocol had created in its restructuring of Eleven's body.
This says an awful lot for one sentence. But I didn't remember the Royal Protocol, so you got me when it comes to trivia.
My own entry is still a work in progress. I'm trying to not kill off anyone.