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Join Date: Jul 2012
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# 100
02-25-2013, 11:45 AM
Originally Posted by gulberat View Post
I just posted my response to the challenge, titled "The Call."

That story, as with some of yours, got much longer than I was expecting. I hope you like it, and would be interested to hear your feedback and what struck you as you were reading.
I really enjoyed this entry on several levels. The interaction between Alyosha and Admiral N'Riuw were rather amusing, but more than that, I loved the scene in which Alyosha was in his true form, and the differences in his perceptions of his surroundings compared to the normal Human condition, and how he was able to perceive the energy patterns in the beings explained excellently why he has such respect for life. I thought it was also a really nice touch as how th'Valek was almost aware of his presence on a subconscious level