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# 8
03-02-2013, 07:28 AM
Originally Posted by cmdrscarlet View Post
@ marcus - The block between her turning on and off the lights. That is a strong description that had me empathize with the character.
Thanks I think more than anything, I was trying to convey her fear of going back to sleep and having another nightmare, as well as reinforcing where she was, and her isolation