Literary Challenge #40 Discussion Thread
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Join Date: Jul 2012
03-06-2013, 10:33 PM
For some reason, when you described him playing "All Along the Watchtower" on the Vulcan harp, I was imagining something like this...
Was that your intention?
Overall, though, I really loved seeing all of the various pieces of Marcus' life that you've told me about, woven into a cohesive whole. While you had a lot of time jumps, it wasn't jarring--somehow it held together and worked.
And having seen what passed between Selek and Marcus, it's now very apparent why a Vulcan under such circumstances would be "sentimental."
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