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Join Date: Feb 2013
03-16-2013, 11:49 AM
Awesome feedback, thanks a lot!
I actually saw your review and spent the morning going through all the dialogue with a fine-tooth comb. Found most of the spelling errors, I think, but I would have completely missed dilithium, thanks for the heads up (I'm kinda new to Star Trek).
While I'm fixing the spelling and factual errors, I'll be sure to work on the consistency as well.
Believe it or not, referring to the officer as "number one", although minor, was one of the biggest things that stood out to me when I was creating the mission. On one hand, at that moment, I felt the captain would refer to that character as something. On the other hand, I have no idea who that character is to the player. I was worried it might be jarring, but left it in in case it could be brushed over. If it stood out to you (first person to play it), it will also stand out to others, though.
Ultimately the devil is in the details, so I really appreciate the feedback, it's what makes the difference between a good mission and a great mission.