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Join Date: Nov 2012
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# 177
03-19-2013, 09:36 PM
Originally Posted by jonsills View Post
Heh heh heh...

Well, let's see what response this one gets. It's not as whimsical as the last, but future entries probably will be.
That was an excellent follow-up piece!

I really liked your use of the counselor to describe your crew and what makes each of them "tick." (This begs the question though: what's the counselor like?)

Especially interesting was the way you brought up minority issues and discrimination among the ranks of Starfleet and the supposedly all-inclusive Federation. You handled that very well.

Now that I know more about your characters, I'm definitely looking forward to their next "whimsical" adventure!

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