Literary Challenge #40 Discussion Thread
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03-23-2013, 07:59 PM
That was a very enjoyable piece! A few typos here and there and a handful of awkwardly structured sentences but nothing glaring. I applaud you for working in a style of writing that you are uncomfortable with.
I really liked the "Fair Haven" reference you put in there.
I am very much looking forward to reading of Wraith's origins!
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