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# 217
03-24-2013, 12:21 AM
Originally Posted by sander233 View Post
@wraithshadow13 -

That was a very enjoyable piece! A few typos here and there and a handful of awkwardly structured sentences but nothing glaring. I applaud you for working in a style of writing that you are uncomfortable with.

I really liked the "Fair Haven" reference you put in there.

I am very much looking forward to reading of Wraith's origins!
It's not a style i'm uncomfortable with, in fact it's the opposite, but when i write like this i tend to do poorly with the technical stuff. As for the story it's self, i'm glad every one liked it, and i really wish i could have done a little better on it. Had Branflakes posted the new challenge from PAX, i probably would have left this unfinished in the folder. It's a little harder getting the feel of some one else's personality when doing these in log form, so i had to make due with a few references from the show.

As for the origin, i would love to do that some time but the Holodeck program is already written out as an introduction for the character.