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Join Date: Sep 2012
Posts: 2,468
# 267
03-29-2013, 09:49 AM
Aaand my third is up. I'm done for this round

SO ...

@ sander233 - A music lyric intro? YOINK for future LC Although non-Fed took a little geting used to, I really liked it and was connected to the characters plight the whole way through. That's going to be a tough one to follow-up for me.

@ sparklysoldier - I've expressed my opinion on this privately, but let me just add to the chorus: damn. it. awesome It's "Deus Ex Machina" God from the Machine?

@ pompouluss - There is a lot more going on here and I'm looking forward to learning how Sasup got into the situation she is getting out of.

@ ironphoenix113 - Two back-to-back Very well done and answered some ends. I too am looking for more concerning the relationship with Bryan's mother (unless you have decided it's a closed arc).

Now I have to go back and catch up on others. This has been a good month!
Kathryn S. Beringer - The Dawn Patrol

Solaris build - Veritatum Liquido Cernene