Holo-synth by Darcanis
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Join Date: Jun 2012
04-01-2013, 08:57 PM
Well I tweaked the mission a bit to address
Replaced the missed "Interact" prompts with proper naming like "Lower Forcefield"
Spaced out the Orions a bit more so they don't one shot your away team
Added holo designation to the enemies to show they are holographic
Moved the third wave of Klingons more into view
Re-sized the forcefields so they fill the entire doorway or hall floor to ceiling
Removed emotions from BOFFs and kept it military instead
Removed extra !!! and fixed some minor spelling errors I missed earlier
Also reworked some of the dialogue to work a bit better
So far I have only had one additional comment since fixing these things, and it said my mission was "Poorly written with excessive and typo-ridden dialogue". Which according to them ruined the mission. Ouch! Personally I didn't find any other typos and as for excessive.. *shrug* to each their own I guess. I did say 10 min not reading and 30 min reading.
Overall though reception has been positive and I thank those who played and left constructive feedback.
I am working on a mission now for the newest contest and will try to keep it less wordy and more balanced. lol