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Join Date: Nov 2012
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# 18
04-03-2013, 06:47 PM
@crimpson7 - Great first entry! A little bit of editing and formatting would go a long way to improving readability but I liked your depiction of the Iconians!

@sharpie65 - I liked your setup of the joint Fed/KDF research station as well as the ships escorting each other. Would have loved to see the battle between those four ships and the Cube though!

@amurorx0 - I loved your Mathis AI. I know from experience it's very difficult to write in a Scottish accent but you pulled it off nicely. But...
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C'mon! Right as it was getting good!