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# 31
04-05-2013, 01:19 AM
@marcusdkane - Another brilliant piece of work! Great interlude there with Bowen and Rebecca Kane's tricorder . I never thought about it but I guess ones personal tricorder would become basically like our laptops or tablets today - business tools that we personalize and stuff with personal files and photos and music. Excellent battle sequence (loving the cool competence of T'Natra.) Kinda wish the Valkkyrie could've killed the klinks with science (viral matrix, maybe, if a gravity well is too implausible?) instead of the Big 'E' warping in to the rescue.

@maverickdude05 - Good story. Would've liked to see your characters fleshed out more. I really liked the "three ships" ending. Nice work!

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