Literary Challenge #41 Discussion Thread
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Join Date: Nov 2012
04-07-2013, 08:46 PM
Originally Posted by
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Great piece! I loved the Tarantino-style "Let's start at the end" opening scene.
Your timeline was very helpful - I used the links to catch up on some of your LCs I'd missed and they where very useful in helping to explain Carter's motivations, as well as those of the Gorn. (Attacking a Federation research post seemed like an odd play for them, but assassinating their ambassador would provoke exactly that sort of surgical but brutal response.)
Can't wait to see where this goes next!
Sometimes, if you wish for peace, you must be prepared to bring war to your enemy's doorstep.
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