Thread: Tension
View Single Post
Career Officer
Join Date: Nov 2012
Posts: 3,452
# 23
05-08-2013, 11:11 PM
Very interesting story so far - thank you for taking the time to share it!

The dialogue gets a bit confusing in places, though. Some more indications of who says what would be helpful. Also, what's the approximate timeframe of this story?


"I won't try to hide behind the Law if what I stand for is what's Right."

The Masterverse Timeline / Ten Forward Fanfics