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# 1 Jassaan Act One (Take 2)
12-24-2010, 09:29 AM
I had some time off for the holidays and reworked the Jassaan Act One mission. I would really appreciate some play on it, I am hoping this will be a first part of a story arc and would appreciate thoughts.

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USS Hall
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# 2 Would someone please try it
01-08-2011, 01:14 PM
Trying again to see if I could get someone to at the least give this story line a try. I have not seen anyone try this one but myself and have seen no feedback.

Anything would help. Would like some feedback before moving to far into Act Two.

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# 3
01-10-2011, 12:23 AM
I tried it out. The review forms are too short I think so I'll add some comments here. Thanks! I like where you're going. I also like all the travel. I think you need to work on the dialogue some more. Also I noticed there was something about the pop-ups needing to be re-initiated on each message (I think that's a foundry issue so you may need to withdraw it and then re-publish it).

Also I can see how you wanted some special effects that weren't in the Foundry yet. Hang in there, I hope they'll give us more tools to play with soon.

Overall, good job! More fun!


P.S. Now go try out my first one "Portents of the Forefathers"! :-)

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