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# 1 Mission Exchange
03-31-2011, 11:07 PM
I'll do yours, if you'll do mine.

Post your missions here and I'll run your missions, if you'll run mine in return.

Mine are:

The Orb Provides - Parts I & II

Honest feedback is desired and provided.

Thanks.
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# 2
04-01-2011, 09:27 AM
I tried to review yours but despite searching from every angle i could think of the missions are not popping up.
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# 3
04-01-2011, 01:09 PM
I've had that happen on a couple of other missions. If you log out and then log back in to STO, it usually fixes the problem.

Thanks.
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# 4 Market Crash
04-01-2011, 08:11 PM
I ran Market Crash. Very nice mission. I have a few suggestions. I didn't put them in the review, but I thought you might want them.

You need more waypoints. It's not always obvious where you need to go next.

I would not put the periods after the dialogue unless it's a whole sentence. I think it looks more professional. Just my opinion though.

But I did enjoy the mission.

Hopefully you can search for The Orb Provides and check out my missions.

Thanks.
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# 5
04-01-2011, 10:58 PM
I also found tonight that if you can't see the missions, try clicking the Review Content button and then see if the missions show in the listing.
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# 6
04-02-2011, 10:40 AM
Thanks for the review.

I managed to find and play part 1 of your mission. Good story and I like good stories. I left a few things in the review but wanted to throw out one thing here.

Gorn on P'Jem, considering how close it is to earth and vulcan, should have triggered every alarm in the quadrant. Some creative explanation might be in order. Other wise good job.
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# 7
04-21-2011, 10:07 AM
I definately enjoyed part 2 more, but a nice little series.

please review mine, Reflections in the Review content tab

thx, salok
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# 8 Reflections Review
04-21-2011, 09:44 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Salok
I definately enjoyed part 2 more, but a nice little series.

please review mine, Reflections in the Review content tab

thx, salok
A very nice job. It's a bit long for my tastes, but other people like them longer, so that's probably good. I would lose the quotes around the speech. I haven't seen that anywhere else in the game.

Good plot and good attention to details. Very good use of branching dialogue.

Thanks.
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# 9 Unholy Alliances II
04-21-2011, 07:16 PM
Unholy Alliances II is now on Holodeck. I'd love to get your thoughts and feedback. Feel free to PM me with any feedback and I will do the same. Added your missions to my todo list.
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# 10 Review of Unholy Alliance II
04-21-2011, 10:38 PM
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Originally Posted by soriedem View Post
Unholy Alliances II is now on Holodeck. I'd love to get your thoughts and feedback. Feel free to PM me with any feedback and I will do the same. Added your missions to my todo list.
Very good mission. It was a bit wordy, but good action. Good design and good battles. Nice plot too. I like missions that have surprises and this one does well. One of the better missions that I've run.

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MCornwell
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