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Foundry Challenge Third Place winner!




Turock, Alpha of a Hirogen hunter cadre, is negotiating a separate peace with the Federation and the Klingon Empire. In exchange for ceasing all hunting of ships and people of both factions the Hirogen will receive a holoship with enough hunting programs to sustain the Hirogenís needs. But sabotage traps your captain and all three representatives in a series of deadly simulations. Can you survive?
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# 2
06-25-2012, 03:20 PM
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Originally Posted by starkofthenorth View Post
Hello again. I have another one for you. Now that the challenge is over I would like you to review my submission, wich took third place (tied).

Title: A Holo Peace
Federation Mission - A Holo Peace
Author: starkofthenorth
Allegiance: Federation
Project ID: ST-HCDDB7SUD

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Summary: This is a good mission with excellent map design, tough battles, and great story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors or any issues with the map designs anywhere in the mission. I would highly recommend this mission to all players who like these elements in a mission. I would have rated this mission with 5 stars but the in game rating system appears to be offline.

Mission Description: This is an intriguing description. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this description.

Grant Mission Dialogue: This is a very detailed and well written grant dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue.

Mission Task: This is a good initial task with a clear start location for the first custom map. I noted no spelling errors with this task.

Mission Entry Prompt: This is a good use of the prompt. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

MAPS:
Zimmerman Belt: This is a good map with well written story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

Outpost 39384: This is a good map with very well written and detailed dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

Hunter Simulation 342: This is a great map design, although the blinding snow is a little annoying it is still a good map design with several very challenging battles. The story dialogue is very well written. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

Outpost 39384#2: This is a good map design with a fun battle. The story dialogue is very well written and a good wrap up to the mission. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

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Thanks again for authoring and for giving me the chance to review your work. You did a great job with the development of this mission. I look forward to playing/reviewing more of your work in the future.
Brian

This critique report also filed 08/04/2012 on forum posting for: In depth mission reports upon request.
If you would like a detailed review of your mission please visit my forum posting "In depth mission reports upon request" for details. Also see Evil 70th's list of missions at "Evil 70th's Missions".
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# 4
08-18-2012, 08:40 PM
Thank you for playing and for the glowing review!
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