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# 191
05-17-2013, 02:42 PM
Hey everyone. Sorry for my lengthy absence. However, I'm happy to say that I'm back, and I finally have something vaguely Romulan to contribute to this thread. Enjoy!
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# 192
05-17-2013, 03:48 PM
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Hey everyone. Sorry for my lengthy absence. However, I'm happy to say that I'm back, and I finally have something vaguely Romulan to contribute to this thread. Enjoy!
Welcome back, I hope nothing too serious kept you from the forum :-\ Fantastic entry, Ta'nara is pretty hardcore, it'll be great to see her future adventures I really liked the description of the Breen raptor, it sounds like a magnificent creature
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# 193
05-17-2013, 03:50 PM
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Thank you for the compliments, Sander, Marcus.
You're very welcome, it was a great read
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# 194
05-17-2013, 05:01 PM
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Hey everyone. Sorry for my lengthy absence. However, I'm happy to say that I'm back, and I finally have something vaguely Romulan to contribute to this thread. Enjoy!
Great entry! I too loved the description you gave of the Brean raptor. And that hand-to-hand combat sequence was magnificently brutal.


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# 195
05-17-2013, 05:31 PM
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Hey everyone. Sorry for my lengthy absence. However, I'm happy to say that I'm back, and I finally have something vaguely Romulan to contribute to this thread. Enjoy!
Excellent read! The hand-to-hand combat sequence was well written, and the descriptions of the environment Ta'nara was in were fatastic

If I may ask, what did you think of my entry? (/shameless self-promotion)
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# 196
05-17-2013, 09:29 PM
Fun entry, Molari.

I definitely hope that Veleen and Ta'nara can meet up in game sometime.
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# 197
05-18-2013, 04:33 AM
Well Done Mollari!
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# 198
05-18-2013, 02:40 PM
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Hey everyone. Sorry for my lengthy absence. However, I'm happy to say that I'm back, and I finally have something vaguely Romulan to contribute to this thread. Enjoy!
That was a well-written fight scene in a well-written story. I will have to learn much from you discreetly.
http://sto-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?p=5629511#post5629511

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# 199
05-19-2013, 01:29 AM
So I've thought up a backstory for my Romulan character, Don'el Sander. Trouble is, right now I'm working on something completely different and it will probably be a couple weeks before I'm ready to work on anything else.

I'll likely end up releasing a story in parts after this LC gets unstickied.


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# 200
05-19-2013, 04:42 PM
I've started work on a new one, but it's going to take longer than we have and more posts than I'm really allowed, so...I won't put it up here, but it IS a Sa'ana story. (I guess I'll have to make that character for the game after all... )
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