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# 61
07-27-2013, 05:47 AM
To: Superhombre777
RE: LC 67

Good story, nice work. I like it.
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# 62
07-27-2013, 08:50 AM
upon suggestions from others here and rl I revised the ending of mine, showing her actually getting back to present time. never intended for it to be that long (or to post just the first part unfinished, but it turns out it was a good thing I did. Laptop is dead, had to use my i pad to write the rest. ) but sometimes it's hard to find a good end point. I was originally planning on having her come back in a later LC, but being there's no way of knowing when one that would fit would be up, better to get it over with now.
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# 63
07-27-2013, 09:50 AM
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Originally Posted by knightraider6 View Post
upon suggestions from others here and rl I revised the ending of mine, showing her actually getting back to present time. never intended for it to be that long (or to post just the first part unfinished, but it turns out it was a good thing I did. Laptop is dead, had to use my i pad to write the rest. :-( ) but sometimes it's hard to find a good end point. I was originally planning on having her come back in a later LC, but being there's no way of knowing when one that would fit would be up, better to get it over with now. :-D
Very nice ending there.

Glad to see your character's new ship show up in a badass fashion.

And I like how you have Temporal Investigations directly working with the people from the 29th Century.

By the way, if you happen to find a spare Temporal Science ship, do you think you could send it to me? My in-game @handle is in my sig, and I'd really like to put one of my Alts in a Wells (to be honest, I actually have a goal of putting each character I make in a different ship).
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# 64
07-27-2013, 10:05 AM
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Very nice ending there.

Glad to see your character's new ship show up in a badass fashion.

And I like how you have Temporal Investigations directly working with the people from the 29th Century.

By the way, if you happen to find a spare Temporal Science ship, do you think you could send it to me? My in-game @handle is in my sig, and I'd really like to put one of my Alts in a Wells (to be honest, I actually have a goal of putting each character I make in a different ship).
It just had to come eventually, didn't it...
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# 65
07-27-2013, 10:11 AM
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Originally Posted by knightraider6 View Post
upon suggestions from others here and rl I revised the ending of mine, showing her actually getting back to present time. never intended for it to be that long (or to post just the first part unfinished, but it turns out it was a good thing I did. Laptop is dead, had to use my i pad to write the rest. ) but sometimes it's hard to find a good end point. I was originally planning on having her come back in a later LC, but being there's no way of knowing when one that would fit would be up, better to get it over with now.
Nice conclusion (although to be honest, I felt the last version was okay...) As for Rhonda getting herself knocked up in a Risian gang bang... Bad Kitty!
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# 66
07-27-2013, 10:27 AM
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Nice conclusion (although to be honest, I felt the last version was okay...) As for Rhonda getting herself knocked up in a Risian gang bang... Bad Kitty!

In her defense, it wasn't really thought of as a risk. Klingons and humans, yeah then all it can take is once. but a lot of other races, while they might be functionally compatable, reproduction requires medical help. Just her bad luck really that her mephit hybrid dna and caitian was close enough
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# 67
07-27-2013, 10:28 AM
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Originally Posted by takeshi6 View Post
Very nice ending there.

Glad to see your character's new ship show up in a badass fashion.

And I like how you have Temporal Investigations directly working with the people from the 29th Century.

By the way, if you happen to find a spare Temporal Science ship, do you think you could send it to me? My in-game @handle is in my sig, and I'd really like to put one of my Alts in a Wells (to be honest, I actually have a goal of putting each character I make in a different ship).
glad you liked it, though that is the first of those ships I have ever seen drop. so I'll probably see another one around, oh, 2015 or so
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# 68
07-27-2013, 10:50 AM
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Originally Posted by knightraider6 View Post
In her defense, it wasn't really thought of as a risk. Klingons and humans, yeah then all it can take is once. but a lot of other races, while they might be functionally compatable, reproduction requires medical help. Just her bad luck really that her mephit hybrid dna and caitian was close enough
Hey, if that's how she rolls... Amanda just cruises bathhouses for random strange
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# 69
07-27-2013, 01:36 PM
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To: Superhombre777
RE: LC 67

Good story, nice work. I like it.
So... you're posting from the future?


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# 70
07-27-2013, 02:52 PM
Ok..got my entry up.

I don't normally write from the immediate first-person perspective, so this was a challenge to me in more than one way. I hope everyone finds it readable.
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