Lt. Commander
Join Date: Sep 2012
Posts: 112
ReviewsTempus Fugit:Amicis et spes Pt.2

Love it

Very good story with balance action in the plot

Big improvements from what you had done in the past, not repeating battles is a big plus. Also see you sent more time working on it not so rush to publish, another good plus.

Apart from the spelling and grammar mistakes, its was okish. The only problem I had was with the first planets with the Romulans, Cardassians and the Terrans, just needs alittle bit more work and keep it simple.

Shadow Alliance........More like Dead alliance

Pew pew! Your missions continue to improve keep up the good work.
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