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Literary Challenge #56 : Academy Teachings
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# 2
01-07-2014, 05:41 PM
I've already got a few ideas percolating...
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01-07-2014, 06:00 PM
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# 4
01-07-2014, 06:33 PM
Interesting.

Might need to write a Nanoha entry for this one, or possibly an entry from another character, not sure - I'll see if I can come up with anything decent.
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# 5
01-07-2014, 07:06 PM
This could be interesting...
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# 6
01-07-2014, 07:18 PM
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Interesting.

Might need to write a Nanoha entry for this one, or possibly an entry from another character, not sure - I'll see if I can come up with anything decent.
Given the trouble Nahona-San is in with Admiral ch'Harrell, I'm not sure if Command would invite her to give a graduation speech Looking forward to what you come up with
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# 7
01-07-2014, 07:47 PM
Ooooh...Bryan is going to have a field day with those cadets
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# 8
01-08-2014, 01:14 AM
Grunt delivers a lecture on a topic most Starfleet personnel are smugly certain they already know perfectly. Spoiler: They're wrong a lot.
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# 9
01-08-2014, 01:31 AM
I got nothing for this.


I'm liking both entries so far. The Nemesis Unit is an interesting character. I'm not sure how I feel about the genre savvy-ness, but I applaud your taking teh risk with the character in these. I see those as more of a satire on the franchise more than actually being part of it, in the same way the Galaxy Quest film is.


And Grunt makes some truly excellent points.
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# 10
01-08-2014, 02:55 AM
@ worffan101: A fun piece, but my thoughts about the Nemesis unit are as before... You're clearly a good writer, but using such a character, IMHO, is like Babe Ruth tieing a hand behind his back, putting a patch over one eye, and only hitting a bunt...

@ jonsills: That was pretty much the speech I was thinking of, I should've expected nothing less of Grunt
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