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# 221
03-12-2014, 09:41 PM
Right, I'm going to hit the sack.

Tomorrow, probably during the patch, I will do LC 7 (for humor) and LC 2 (Three's origin story). Then I'll see about a LC 45 redux featuring "Do'eth"/D'trel and Mirror Hakeev, because grimdark is not that bad in small quantities.
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# 222
03-13-2014, 10:06 AM
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Right, I'm going to hit the sack.

Yeah!... You show that bag who's boss!



Also, i was able to get my entry up. This is based on challenge 41: Call to Arms
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# 223
03-13-2014, 10:09 AM
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Yeah!... You show that bag who's boss!


What did you think of my LC 2 redux?

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Also, i was able to get my entry up. This is based on challenge 41: Call to Arms
Awesome! Very action-packed.
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# 224
03-13-2014, 04:42 PM
So, after a long day driving and doing...... computery things, I guess, I got home and was bitten by the writing bug. So, I present my Lone Drone LC (whichever number it was).

Borg Queen played by Alice Krige (I always felt she did a far superior job at the role than Susanna Tompson). And set at the same time (and place) as my last redux.
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A Romulan Strike Team, Missing Farmers and an ancient base on a Klingon Border world. But what connects them? Find out in my First Foundary mission: 'The Jeroan Farmer Escapade'
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# 225
03-13-2014, 04:54 PM
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So, after a long day driving and doing...... computery things, I guess, I got home and was bitten by the writing bug. So, I present my Lone Drone LC (whichever number it was).

Borg Queen played by Alice Krige (I always felt she did a far superior job at the role than Susanna Tompson). And set at the same time (and place) as my last redux.
Well, duh. Alice Krige had the sexy dominatrix routine down PAT.

Solid, tight entry. Very nice! Interesting perspective on the Borg Queen.

What do you think of my most recent two?
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# 226
03-13-2014, 06:34 PM
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What did you think of my LC 2 redux?


i liked it, but it seemed really short. I would have liked to see more interaction with Fred and Omek or maybe with the Admiral and what she was doing in town, but overall, I liked it.
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# 227
03-13-2014, 09:11 PM
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i liked it, but it seemed really short. I would have liked to see more interaction with Fred and Omek or maybe with the Admiral and what she was doing in town, but overall, I liked it.
Thank you for the feedback!

To tell the truth, I was running low on ideas for the interactions. Shevet is much better at this stuff than I am; I just write good scenes, not full stories.

Any thoughts on my other stuff?
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# 228
03-14-2014, 09:25 AM
Yeah, I posted another one. This one's sort of black comedy; some parts are a little disturbing, but the subject matter is just plain ridiculous. Trying to get a sort of "Stepford Wives" vibe with it.
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# 229
03-14-2014, 04:24 PM
It's finally done (he said, sighing heavily). Took a while to figure out one of the segues.

Jon's Post, supplemental:

"I beamed to the torpedo room and shot myself out because why not?" Yeah, that's Three all right...
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I'm old enough not to care too much about what you think of me --
But I'm young enough to remember the future, the way things ought to be...

- Rush, "Cut To the Chase", Counterparts

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# 230
03-14-2014, 04:34 PM
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It's finally done (he said, sighing heavily). Took a while to figure out one of the segues.
GRUUUUUUUNT!!!!!!!!

He's back! With awesomeness! And a psychotic Andorian! And generalized Ferengi badassery!

Awesome story, inventive and flawlessly written. Grunt is a really awesome character.

Any thoughts on my pile of entries?
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