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Yes. Several others have posted these types of review mission threads so ill start a KDF one . Im always up for KDF missions so post your KDF missions here if you want them reviewing .

No actual format just plant your mission here with its name and ill see what I can do!

Mission Review List:-

1:- Defend the Empire! - By Elkysium - 4 Stars
2:- Time the Enemy - By Havraha - 5 Stars
3:- Project Hotrod - By Foxrocks - 4 Stars (Tribble Mission)
4:- General Rebellion - By Capt.PFDennis - 5 Stars
5:- Stirring the Hornets Nest (Part 1) - By sabredruid - 1 Star
6:- The Enemy of my Enemy - By HathorSC - 2 Stars
7:- Peace Sells Part 2: The Bait - By Geoff_484 - 4 Stars
8:- Trill Death Do We Part - By Kahn - 2 Stars
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# 2
04-04-2011, 03:44 PM
Thanks for doing this for peeps.

Here is my first mission:

Defend the Empire!

ST-HEP22MMEG

Strange readings have been reported near the penal colony of Rura Penthe. A large federation force has slipped off the radar. The last known coordinates were near the border of the Pi Canis and Omega Leonis Sector Blocks.

Please be brutal!

I have some old screens here, haven't had a chance to update yet.

Thx a million!!
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# 3
04-04-2011, 03:51 PM
I have a KDF mission finished, but every time I play through it on Holodeck, the science officer starts saying everyone's lines despite what I've programmed. I'm unsure if others would see it (although I have to make that assumption) so I've withdrawn it from the database.

But, I'm going to see if its a problem for everyone later tonight, and if its not, I'll publish it for play through. It is --

Time the Enemy
ST-HRFCI27BN
http://starbaseugc.com/wiki/index.php/Time_the_Enemy
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# 4
04-04-2011, 04:05 PM
Thanks Ooiue for checking out my first low-level Klingon mission (Not For Resale) already. If I get a chance, I'll try to review the missions posted here as well. The more Klingon missions the better!
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# 5
04-04-2011, 04:23 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Havraha View Post
I have a KDF mission finished, but every time I play through it on Holodeck, the science officer starts saying everyone's lines despite what I've programmed. I'm unsure if others would see it (although I have to make that assumption) so I've withdrawn it from the database.
This is a bug that actually affects all KDF missions, even Cryptic designed ones apparently. Unfortunately there isn't anything we can do about it until it gets fixed.


Ooiue, I don't know if you want to review only Holodeck misisons or not, but if you don't mind going to Tribble, I did publish a KDF mission there. Unfortunately only one person has even bothered to play it, so I'd definitely appreciate a review if you don't mind playing on Tribble.

The mission is "Project Hotrod"
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# 6
04-04-2011, 04:43 PM
Mission Review


Name:- Defend the Empire! - By Elkysium

Prologue


Strange readings have been reported near the penal colony of Rura Penthe. A large federation force has slipped off the radar. The last known coordinates were near the border of the Pi Canis and Omega Leonis Sector Blocks.

Story/Plot


4 stars

One word:- Brilliant. I loved the idea that the Federation has sneakily established a base near Qo'nos but it makes me wonder how they got there (if there is an explanation somewhere in the mission I have probably missed it). I also liked the Ferengi sub-plot and finding him on the Federation base. I was confused why the federation would capture a Ferengi like that but it was entertaining to see him wave about behind that forcefield xD. Also, it makes me wonder how a Federation fleet simply bypassed the KDF defence grid and went straight to Qo'nos.
Storyline was brilliant but a few things may need to be looked at (unless I've missed them).

Environment/Map Design


5 stars

I'd give you 20 stars for those environments. The asteroid field was my favourite with masses of blue clouds and asteroid there and the Asteroid Base planted in the middle which I actually almost missed.

Keep up the great map design work .

Combat


4 stars

There was a lot of combat in this mission. The initial asteroid combat was very difficult with 5 groups clumped together like that. Took me ages to finally destroy them. I also liked the final epic battle which I found much more entertaining because of the fleet on fleet NPC battle and me just diving in the middle of it. Ground combat I liked the most (but was a bit easy for me since my KDF character simply obliterates NPC's on ground wheever they fight him).

The space combat needs work a bit but I found the ground combat fine.

Dialogue


3 stars

There were a LOT of spelling errors and quite a few grammer errors if I remember correctly. You also didn't use captical letters for a lot of the names (such as Ferengi) which decreased the overall score. The actual dialogue from the NPC's was fantastic but the grammer errors didnt help it.

Brushing up on your English for this mission will help it enormously


FINAL VERDICT:- 4 Stars

Mission had fantastic environments and great plot. The combat was generally difficult and the dialogue was mixed with errors but great NPC dialogue.
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# 7
04-04-2011, 04:46 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Foxrocks
Ooiue, I don't know if you want to review only Holodeck misisons or not, but if you don't mind going to Tribble, I did publish a KDF mission there. Unfortunately only one person has even bothered to play it, so I'd definitely appreciate a review if you don't mind playing on Tribble.

The mission is "Project Hotrod"
yeah ill pop my head onto tribble and try your mission .

i presume your waiting for reviews on it before actually publishing it to holodeck?
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# 8
04-04-2011, 07:25 PM
Thanks a million Ooiue!!!

I am quite embarrassed i had so many spelling errors!

As far as the Ferengi went, my initial intention was him being captured on the way to deliver his merchandise. The Federation didn't want to take the chance of him ruining their plans. I guess i left the gap a little too wide...

How they bypassed the grid...Well that was a whole other map. I wasn't sure how what i had would be received, as far as being too much or too difficult. It also ties into why the penal colony systems were malfunctioning, but i'll save that for a later update on the mission.

I appreciate your time and thoughts and will correct them as quick as possible!

Thanks again!!
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# 9
04-04-2011, 08:08 PM
Hey Ooiue,

I've got a KDF mission for you, but I'm not sure if you played it already. I know you left a very kind review on one of mine, but anyway:


General Rebellion
Holodeck
ST-HL29LN7JT
Level 16+

Thanks
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# 10
04-05-2011, 01:02 AM
Stirring the hornets nest , Holodeck. any level now(changed from 31+)

part 1 of a 3 part series. Involving an inter-house conflict threatening the stability of the empire.
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