I copied and pasted your title as printed.

Still no mission?

There's two areas to review missons Community authored or review missions. try review missons. i don't know why it's not in all of them. - OOP

GUYS... try the "Review" button to become Reviewer you'll find ALL missions here

Thanks. Didn't try the Foundry on Tribble so I didn't know all the tricks

The mission is on HOLODECK, not tribble server.

Mission number is ST-HPZKZP6S6

- OOP

If you have the mission text in a text file i would be happy to look over it for you.

- I've seen a lot "an" instead of "and" (as if your "d"-key was broken),
- you make no diffrence between they're / there / their
and some various typos i don't remember right now...

(i usually dont care about a few typos here and there, i make enough myself, but to be honest the amount in your mission was a little high to not say anything about it)

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i can see the time you've spend on the mission that is why i wanted to give you a full honest review with proper feedback.
But as i said, keep on it, this will be a good one if you can ever finish it ^^

Here's one tip: Instead of using a Bridge Officer for the Captain's speech, consider using a ship costume. That might still be somewhat confusing (why is my ship talking), but at least it removes the confusion why your BO is saying your lines.

Unfortuantely so far, I always wonder why the BOs are saying so much in Cryptic-generated missions, and why I only get one sentence replies. That problem is not your fault, but entirely Cryptic's.

Ideally you should use short, generic text for player captain's dialogue. Let players choose the *intent* and meaning of their response, but with the current tools it's best to leave the actual words to their imagination.

Moved this to the Foundry Forum.

I still can't get it. I've tried both places even with the dashes I can't find it