Hey there

this is my first post on the STO Forums so, first of all, i want to say Hi to all of you.

I've made my first mission with the foundry, and i need feedback and reviews to improve my style and to gain experience in mission-making. The name is Grounded: The Beginning.

As you can see this is the beginning of a series, that i'm going to develop if you guys enjoy the first mission.

In Grounded: The Beginning you're called by a Vulcan Science Officer on Memory Alpha to investigate an uncharted planet in the Delta Volanis Cluster. Apparently the crew of the USS Andalusia has been foundend on a terrestrial world and you have to investigate, and make sure that everyone is alive. The second half of the mission may seem strange, but my intent is to raise a lot of questions that i'm going to answer with the second quest.

The mission itself uses 2 new space maps and one new ground map.

This is my first mission but i've tried to get away from the "Hello World" thing by studying a particolar storyline that will end in something big.

Thanks everyone!

Note: The mission is on Tribble.

A new version with minor text changes is online

Greetings,

First of all, I love your Avatar. Absolutely hilarious! The wife saw it and thinks it's the cutest and funniest thing she's ever seen. LOL :p
Second, Is this on the holodeck or tribble? I'll run thru it for you. I enjoy new missions to check out so
hopefully everything is working OK. If I have any problems or comments, I'll PM you.

Duke-of-Rock

Hi Duke,

thanks for your reply! This mission is on Tribble, I'm still waiting for reviewers to give it a try. I'm going to edit the first post so everyone knows it.

I love this avatar too I'm using it since 2004 and i think it's the best avatar ever created on the internet XD

Just let me know what do you think about the mission, and if you have any hints about the storyline feel free to write it down

So? Nobody want to help the newcomer?