I noticed you aren't getting any replies here. You might want to try the pvp forum. There are always a few there willing to help with your build. I don't pvp anymore so I can't really help you. Best of luck.
I can tell you that the build you're using now seems a bit muddled. I try to avoid mixing beams and cannons. Spec into beams if you're using a cruiser, cannons for a raptor or bop... again just my opinion. (and I rarely use a torp in the aft slots... mines or an extra beam/turret for me.) Powers/consoles wise... hit the pvp forums and ask around. Too much has been tweeked since I last did any pvp, I'm zero help there.