Feel free to link directly to the entry you are commenting on. And please remember: we're not here to tear each other up. Do not troll your fellow Captains, give feedback! Let the others know what you liked and disliked. Maybe they can even go back then and tweak their entries!
Let's get those creative juices flowing!
Brandon "BranFlakes" Felczer | Former Community Team Lead for Perfect World Entertainment
Took a new direction on this one, in that it comes from a relatively new character on the ship, a lowly engineer who went through hell and is now helping to pick up the pieces while the captains all get to be the face of Starfleet, while he's left on the grindstone.
As always, critique is encouraged and appreciated, even if it is short
I dunno, i've been debating writing for this one but i haven't decided yet. While the new zone is pretty, i'm not really impressed and it seems like there's a lack of stuff to do other than a few daily grinds. If i did do this one it would probably be all character development but even then i'm still not sure what i'd do.
I made my entry a sequel to the Terra Nova literary challenge a few weeks ago. In that story, Section 31 basically stole the ship and no one knew what happened while the crew was unconscious. In this entry, Section 31 sets up a dialogue with a rogue Romulan who has dire news to share with the Federation...