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# 21
08-12-2009, 05:45 PM
Yep, things in general are starting to circle the drain faster and faster now.
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# 22
08-12-2009, 05:47 PM
Another well done writeup... except the last paragraph. Starfleet Academy accepts anyone who meets the requirements, Worf, Data, Bajorans attended Starfleet Academy. There are also more then one way to become an officer.
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# 23
08-12-2009, 05:49 PM
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Another well done writeup... except the last paragraph. Starfleet Academy accepts anyone who meets the requirements, Worf, Data, Bajorans attended Starfleet Academy. There are also more then one way to become an officer.
Agreed, last paragraph was poor. but the rest was amazing
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# 24
08-12-2009, 05:56 PM
Yay!! Another great read!
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# 25
08-12-2009, 06:03 PM
It would seem the Federation has grown too big for its britches. Perhaps it needs to lose some mass.
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# 26
08-12-2009, 06:07 PM
these keep gettin better and better. this one was my favorite thus far. lots of intricate details and wide scoped observations. can't wait to see who Jake interviews.
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# 27
08-12-2009, 06:10 PM
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Another well done writeup... except the last paragraph. Starfleet Academy accepts anyone who meets the requirements, Worf, Data, Bajorans attended Starfleet Academy. There are also more then one way to become an officer.
That's Cryptic's opening / rationalle for all our made-up character species. Pretty soon, there will be a call to arms in both the Federation and the Empire for all able-bodied officers to take command of a ship. Just you wait...
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# 28
08-12-2009, 06:12 PM
A nice read , thank you.
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# 29
08-12-2009, 06:13 PM
Also enjoyed the little nod to the USS Titan. Appreciate it, guys.
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# 30
08-12-2009, 06:22 PM
the artificial quantum singularities could be the result of the rift formed from species 8472 ships entering our space
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