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Title: A Cold Heart
Author: Zahinder
Level: 35+
Language: English
Time: 20-30 minutes
Eligible for officer's reports: No. I would really appreciate charitable folks to give this a look and review away.

A routine assignment to transport scientists turns deadly.

A mixture of combat, dialog, story, exploration, and discovery -- grinders look elsewhere.
This mission should take 20-30 minutes to complete.

(This will be part 1 of... several. So far only this episode is complete)
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# 2
12-19-2012, 07:57 AM
Ah. My first 1/5 with no comment.

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# 3
12-19-2012, 08:41 AM
Originally Posted by zahinder View Post
Ah. My first 1/5 with no comment.

Welcome to being a Foundry author.

Anyway congrats on your first mission. I'll try and get to it tonight or tomorrow (might be going for a second viewing of the Hobbit, lol).
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# 4
12-19-2012, 08:43 AM
Greatly appreciated. I'm working on part 2, and having some idea if there are commonly viewed deep flaws in the first would be better to find out sooner than later. (Though the two written reviews so far are positive)
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# 5
12-20-2012, 03:57 AM
Made a few tweaks to ensure the mission flows more smoothly (plus one incorrect officer in dialog). Thanks for pointing stuff out, Zorbane!
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# 6
12-20-2012, 09:27 AM
np its a good mission, especially for a first one! Just needs some plays to get over the time hump now.

Check out my Foundry missions:
Standalone - The Great Escape - The Galaxy's Fair - Purity I: Of Denial - Return to Oblivion
The Defenders - Duritanium Man - The Improbable Bulk - [WIP] Commander Rihan

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