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# 471
12-30-2012, 12:17 PM
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I liked Enliss. She seemed like a strong and very driven character. I am sure we will see her again.

Brian
Ah, cool. Did you read the other thread? It's not really meant to be harsh.
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# 472
12-30-2012, 09:53 PM
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Originally Posted by designationxr377 View Post
Say, Evil70th, I've got a new mission out and I like your reviews and help whenever I publish a new mission.

With my recent publish though, I worked around with some dialog mechanics to make the desired feel I wanted. And lots and lots of branches with different triggers. Knowing you go through a lot of the dialog via minimizing and re-opening dialog windows, you could be exposed to the mechanics going... well... pretty nuts. I doubt it would make the mission impossible at any point to complete, but, would definitely break the feel of the mission in a few points.

Would you still be interested in running a review on my mission, despite the added awkward my optional objectives and mini-things will add to it via your review process?
I am always happy to do mission reviews. With work and school my time is pretty much limited to weekends for reviews but I will get to them as they enter the queue.

Brian
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# 473
12-30-2012, 09:58 PM
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Originally Posted by markhawkman View Post
Ah, cool. Did you read the other thread? It's not really meant to be harsh.
I went back and read the thread and I do not take any of your reply as harsh, nor would I expect you, or any other author to take my reviews as harsh. As I always say, my reviews are yours to do with as you please.

Thanks for authoring,
Brian
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# 474
12-31-2012, 06:19 AM
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Originally Posted by evil70th View Post
Federation Mission - In the Shadow of MIDAS, Part 1
Author: greendragoon
Allegiance: Federation
Project ID: ST-HJ7NMF3PH

----------Report Start-----------

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---------End Report----------

Thanks again for authoring and for giving me the chance to review your work. The mission from start to finish is outstanding. I look forward to playing/reviewing more of your work in the future.
Brian

This critique report also filed 12/30/2012 on forum posting for: In the Shadow of MIDAS, Part 1
Thank you Evil70th, for taking the time to go through and review my mission. This is all excellent feedback, and a few things I hadn't even considered before. It will probably all make it into my next polish pass. I'll definitely call on you again when Part 2 is ready.

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# 475
12-31-2012, 01:15 PM
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Originally Posted by evil70th View Post
Federation Mission - Cold Enemies
Author: Q400
Allegiance: Federation
Project ID: ST-HMPU9PRYS

----------Report Start-----------

Summary: The mission is a nice combat oriented mission with some story dialogue to move it forward. I would recommend this mission to other players who like combat oriented missions, although not on Elite level as it was challenging enough on Normal level.

Below are a couple of things I noted while playing the mission that I wanted to let you know about. Everything in this write up should be seen as suggestions on ways I felt you could improve certain elements of the mission. They are yours to do with as you see fit.

Mission Description: This is a good description. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this description.

Grant Mission Dialogue: The grant dialogue and follow dialogue are well written. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue.

Mission Task: This is a good initial task with a clear start location for the first custom map. I noted no spelling errors with this task.

Mission Entry Prompt: This is a good use of the prompt. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this prompt.

MAPS:
The Vault System: This is a nice map design with several tough but fun battles. The story dialogue is well written. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

The Vault - Floor Three - Engineering and Cargobays: This is a good map design with a tough but fun battle. I noted one item to consider changing:
-One of the injured Reman?s is sitting above the medical bed.

Meeting System: This is a good map design with a nice battle. The story dialogue is well written. I noted one item to consider changing:
-The "Angered Admiral" dialogue; consider changing "[Rank]?[Rank]?" to read "[Rank]? [Rank]?".

Meeting Place: This is a nice simple map design with some tough but fun battles. The story dialogue is well written. I noted one item to consider changing:
-Consider adding a respawn point closer to the Breen position.

---------End Report----------
Thanks again for authoring and for giving me the chance to review your work. I enjoyed the mission and good luck in the challenge. I look forward to playing/reviewing more of your work in the future.
Brian
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# 476
12-31-2012, 03:30 PM
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Thank you Evil70th, for taking the time to go through and review my mission. This is all excellent feedback, and a few things I hadn't even considered before. It will probably all make it into my next polish pass. I'll definitely call on you again when Part 2 is ready.
As always, I am glad to help. I look forward to playing/reviewing more of your work in the future. Keep up the great work.

Brian
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# 477
12-31-2012, 03:31 PM
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Originally Posted by q403 View Post
Thanks - I appreciate it
Glad to help. Keep up the good work.

Brian
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# 478 Happy New Year
12-31-2012, 03:33 PM
Happy New Year to each and everyone of you out there in the STO community, and to your families as well!

Brian
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# 479
12-31-2012, 11:39 PM
I figure I'll toss this one at you for the polish and input you give. Thanks in advance, as always. (Be careful/aware that some dialog trees may provoke different effects, but should not effect mission completion, only flow.)


Mission: Time Will Tell
Author: XR-377
Level: 31+
Allegiance: Klingon
Estimated Mission Length:30-45m (Full Dialog Tree Exploration may yield different results)
Method of Delivery: Forum Post

Description: When K.D.F. High Command asks you to investigate a strange anomaly near Qo'noS you find yourself face to face with a dark future for the Empire. Will you find the guides you need to make sure it doesn't come to pass?
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# 480
01-01-2013, 08:40 AM
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Originally Posted by designationxr377 View Post
I figure I'll toss this one at you for the polish and input you give. Thanks in advance, as always. (Be careful/aware that some dialog trees may provoke different effects, but should not effect mission completion, only flow.)


Mission: Time Will Tell
Author: XR-377
Level: 31+
Allegiance: Klingon
Estimated Mission Length:30-45m (Full Dialog Tree Exploration may yield different results)
Method of Delivery: Forum Post

Description: When K.D.F. High Command asks you to investigate a strange anomaly near Qo'noS you find yourself face to face with a dark future for the Empire. Will you find the guides you need to make sure it doesn't come to pass?
Hi XR-377,

Thanks for the review request. I will review this mission as soon as I can and post in the forums as soon as it is completed.

Thanks for authoring,
Brian
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