The whole thing was rushed to be honest, I had more footage than time. I was beginning to get bored of it, and wanted it wrapped up quickly. (I have a very short attention span, which is why my videos are usually short.)
I wasn't happy with the voice dialogue at all, though it did serve a purpose to open the story, even though it made it slow starting.
Thanks again for the feedback, it is very much appreciated.
Originally Posted by guardianvalour
It would be interesting to learn more of the story (Project Eclipse) your video showcases.
The back story (very basically) was that Starfleet find a derelict cube, and tow it secretly away to study it. A scientist on board conducts research on the drones (which he was told he couldn't do) and accidentally awakes them. He had outside help of some kind though to set up his little lab deep within the cube. Starfleet only had the Eclipse for about a week in total, before the incident.
The Eclipse is still out there, and I wanted it left with a way out for Rhymer, and to set up a sequel (if I ever make it) with a dramatic opening scene of Klingons storming the prison and breaking him out (because I wanted the next one to be more action packed from the very start). The KDF had heard rumors of the cube, but were unable to locate it. Obtaining Rhymer would be the next best thing.
Originally Posted by gulberat
What voice-synthesizer software did you use?
Natural Reader. There is another one called Ivona that is pretty good.