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# 11
04-03-2013, 11:15 AM
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It is the first time i write a story for a game. The thing that inspired me was a drawing of an Iconian that i saw and made me wrote my story
Nice story, thank you for sharing
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# 12
04-03-2013, 11:19 AM
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Humm, I've got two ideas, one more light hearted with my Caitian engineer, the other, a lot darker with my tac officer. Too bad only can do one, which to do..
Could you combine the two into one story?
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# 13
04-03-2013, 11:23 AM
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Could you combine the two into one story?
not really, as in the second option, well there will at the minimum be a board of inquiry, if not a Court Marital over what she does.
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# 14
04-03-2013, 11:29 AM
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not really, as in the second option, well there will at the minimum be a board of inquiry, if not a Court Marital over what she does.
Sounds like all the more reason to juxtapose the two I'm going to be going with a semi-light-semi-action piece, I just need to come up with some new character names and do a bit of research before I get writing
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# 15
04-03-2013, 12:03 PM
This will be an interesting challenge.

Not sure if I'll come up with an entry for this, but I do have something that could be used for the technology we're protecting.
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# 16
04-03-2013, 03:33 PM
Here is my wee quickie.

Had a thought of a fever pitched siege, but every thought I had as to writing about the siege itself was playing out exactly the same as my entry in challenge #32.

Then I had a thought, why is it that all this conflict and damage to these ships, yet the captain's log never gets affected? I'm calling bs to this, so my log got corrupted

Anyhoos, bash away
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# 17
04-03-2013, 03:42 PM
Okay, I know exactly where this one's going! Now to brainstorm through the week, buy plenty of coffee ahead of time and have Saturday waiting for nonstop typing...
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# 18
04-03-2013, 06:47 PM
@crimpson7 - Great first entry! A little bit of editing and formatting would go a long way to improving readability but I liked your depiction of the Iconians!

@sharpie65 - I liked your setup of the joint Fed/KDF research station as well as the ships escorting each other. Would have loved to see the battle between those four ships and the Cube though!

@amurorx0 - I loved your Mathis AI. I know from experience it's very difficult to write in a Scottish accent but you pulled it off nicely. But...
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ERROR

Log file corrupted. Continuing at next available data segment.
C'mon! Right as it was getting good!


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# 19
04-03-2013, 10:12 PM
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Originally Posted by amurorx0 View Post
Here is my wee quickie.

Had a thought of a fever pitched siege, but every thought I had as to writing about the siege itself was playing out exactly the same as my entry in challenge #32.

Then I had a thought, why is it that all this conflict and damage to these ships, yet the captain's log never gets affected? I'm calling bs to this, so my log got corrupted

Anyhoos, bash away
What? I think it'd be better to see the details than have the "corrupted" entry. Maybe you could add an epilogue where the admiralty harasses your captain for more information. You wouldn't have to rehash all the gory details in that conversation/argument, and it'd be more satisfying than the complete blank you have given us.
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# 20
04-04-2013, 12:06 AM
Here is mine.


Also, my first lit challenge I thought I would try for sherry and giggles.
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