No offense, but this is something you should really send to just your fleet? It's not an ideology that everyone will stick to (even if some of it is fairly decent)
Here is one you should have that involves the right of the individual
Their right to remain independent. Some people don't want to join fleets. I know a few that think the way Fleet's are; especially with the heavy demand and focus on starbase projects rather than the individuals, a stain on this game rather than benefit.
Another factor is being an officer or leader. A lot of people have no idea the responsibilities and duty they must perform but that's a book rather than a post. Your Section 3 really says nothing about how to be a real leader; unfortunately you don't get to see many around on this as there is literally no risk of failure on STO.