In Mine Enemy, I think it's a nice touch that you run into Rai and all. However, when you recruit you, she joins as a Federation DOFF. Shouldn't she be a Rom DOFF?
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On Cutting the Cord. Nice edits. Still, the orbital bombardment from a romulan ship should be Green/Plasma. Sela vanishes at the start of her appearance [her lines still play, just no one is there]. Hakeev remains standing after the post-battle cutscene.