Lieutenant
Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 39
# 11
04-08-2013, 11:15 AM
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Originally Posted by hevach View Post
I'd settle for just cleaning a little house on the staff.
They're sorta mouthy, but they work for cheap. Budget cuts... You know how it is.

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Originally Posted by hevach View Post
I tend to mentally rewrite missions as I play them anyway - every time a mission has a bridge officer tells me about his parents or brother serving on another ship, it's my Jem'hadar's face in the window, and I'm pretty sure his cloning pod isn't a nurse the Enterprise.
Yeah, or when my Vulcan tactical officer shows up with the "scared" animation and tells me she was so frightened when the alien jumped out from behind the rock.
Commander
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 278
# 12
04-30-2013, 08:31 PM
Well, I greatly enjoyed this series! I DO hope that you consider making a "sister-series" to this to bring about that peace that was the drive at the beginning of the series! Actually, let me rephrase that. PLEASE make a "sister-series" to this one and complete the original objective of the series!
Commander
Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 403
# 13
05-04-2013, 04:15 AM
I'm interested in playing this but I wont have time to for a few days.
Could you mail me in-game of Part One's title or ID Code please?

rickysmith1
ATTENTION: UNDINE SPACE & TKON GROUND SETS ALL THE WAY DEVS!.. Q-TRIBBLE, MAYBE!?.. EJECT WARP CORE ABILITY LIKE LAYING A SUPER-MINE, HELL YES!!!.. SPACE HIPPIES FROM TOS PLAYING MUSIC IN OUR FLEET STARBASE, NO, JUST, NO... CAIT & RA'KHOLN ADVENTURE ZONE, YES

Commander
Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 278
# 14
05-06-2013, 07:48 AM
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Originally Posted by rickysmith1 View Post
I'm interested in playing this but I wont have time to for a few days.
Could you mail me in-game of Part One's title or ID Code please?

rickysmith1
Hey, not to seem rude or anything...but you can find the title of the first part on the first page of this thread!
Ensign
Join Date: Jun 2013
Posts: 1
# 15
06-29-2013, 06:49 AM
Just started playing Star Trek Online and played all the Overture foundry missions. The series is just superb.

I can easily see this being a two parter in any future Star Trek television series. Keep up th good work.
Career Officer
Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 709
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Originally Posted by kineticimpulser View Post
Hey Brian -

It's been a long time coming, but it's finally here...

Mission Name: Overture 6: Finale with Cannonade
Author: @KineticImpulser
Minimum Level: Any
Allegiance: Federation
Project ID: ST-HECU5DAJR
Estimated Mission Length: 100-120 min

Overture 6 Final Trailer

Hope you're getting more time off these days!

Federation Mission - Overture 6: Finale with Cannonade
Author: KineticImpulser
Allegiance: Federation
Project ID: ST-HECU5DAJR

----------Report Start-----------

Summary: This is a great story mission and excellent wrap up to the mission series. The map designs are outstanding. The battles are balanced and fun to engage. The story dialogue is in-depth, riveting, and excellently written. It hardly felt like 2 plus hours of playing time to complete the mission. I would highly recommend this mission and the entire series to all players who like a great story oriented mission with just enough fighting to keep it interesting.

Below are a couple of things I noted while playing the mission that I wanted to let you know about. Everything in this write up should be seen as suggestions on ways I felt you could improve certain elements of the mission. They are yours to do with as you see fit.

Mission Description: This is a good description. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this description.

Grant Mission Dialogue: The grant and follow on dialogue are well written. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue.

Mission Task: This is a good initial task with a clear start location for the first custom map. I noted no spelling errors with this task.

Mission Entry Prompt: This is a good use of the entry prompt. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this prompt

MAPS:
Your Ship - Hanger Deck: This is a good map design with excellent story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

Unikuia Prime - Vanguard: This is a great map design with well balanced battles and excellent story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

Boarding the U.S.S. Serapis - Engineering Deck: This is a good map design with a fun battle and excellent story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue. I noted one item to consider changing:
-The Lock the Holo-matrix console in engineering appears to be sitting slightly off the deck. Consider moving it down on the Y axis.

Boarding the U.S.S. Serapis - Crew Deck: This is a good map design with a fun battle and great story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue. I noted one item to consider changing:
-The Lock the Holo-matrix console in cabin appears to be sitting well above the deck. Consider moving it down on the Y axis.

Boarding the U.S.S. Serapis - Bridge: This is a nice map design with a good battle and well written story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue. I noted one item to consider changing:
-The Lock the Holo-matrix console in cabin appears to be sitting slightly above the deck. Consider moving it down on the Y axis.

Unikuia Prime - Le Fin Grande: This is a great map design with a spectacular battle and outstanding story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

U.S.S. Serapis - Debriefing: This is a good map design with well written story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

U.S.S. Serapis - Epilogue: This is a good map design with well written story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

---------End Report----------

Thanks again for authoring and for giving me the chance to review your work. You did a great job with this mission and the entire series. I look forward to playing/reviewing more of your work in the future.
Brian

This critique report also filed 08/11/2013 on forum posting for: In depth mission reports upon request.
If you would like a detailed review of your mission please visit my forum posting "In depth mission reports upon request" for details.
Lieutenant
Join Date: Jul 2012
Posts: 35
# 17
12-12-2013, 06:56 AM
just played through a;; the missions and i found the story "gripping" and funny i couldnt stop i hope you make more with these charictors
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