This was a great story for my Ferasan Captain (by the way, Cryptic, how about letting us use our preferred rank in dialogue; my toon is Captain not the over-ranked Lt Gen). Author gave a nice backstory for Ferasans and worked the interaction to include both Ferasan and non-Ferasan toons being used in mission.
The only flaw that prevented me from giving it 5-stars was the lack of clear instructions for the start point, which is in the transporter room on Qonos. Again, STO, this is more on you since your mission builder does not make it routine for authors to define the start point in the mission overview/brief.
I give this mission a must play for both Ferasan and non-Ferasan toons in KDF.