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# 2
02-04-2014, 06:34 PM
What does Section 31 think of my character? O_O' I have 13(or 14...) of them... I can't do just one. This might take a while to write.
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# 3
02-04-2014, 06:47 PM
Congrats to Aten66 for his LC idea being chosen!
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# 4
02-04-2014, 07:04 PM
Oh, this should be tasty. It's just occurred to me that three of the command crew of the Bedford are from non-Federation species, and one belongs to a species that is often overtly hostile to the Federation...
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Lt. Commander
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# 5
02-04-2014, 07:06 PM
I have 15 characters, and one of them actually happens to be in the game's "Section 31" fleet. Time to polish my biodegradable matter until it refracts light.


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Rihannsu
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# 6
02-04-2014, 07:53 PM
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Originally Posted by zidanetribal View Post
I have 15 characters, and one of them actually happens to be in the game's "Section 31" fleet. Time to polish my biodegradable matter until it refracts light.
Refracts? That sounds interesting.... Wouldn't heating and compacting be a better way to give it a refractive index?
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# 7
02-04-2014, 08:26 PM
Mine is up. Let's just say that Franklin Drake holds a grudge against Three for her humiliating treatment of him and several of his agents.

And Section 31 doesn't count their blessings and thank their lucky stars that those agents who got spaced were in EV suits. No, they're all in a tizzy because Three put her foot down and said that the next spy caught on her ship would suffer from rapid, fatal atmospheric decompression.
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# 8
02-04-2014, 10:13 PM
Hmm... toughie... I have a lot of characters...

Though I probably could do a piece on Veleen Takor, given that she's technically allied herself with S31...

Anyway, a very good topic!!
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# 9
02-04-2014, 10:32 PM
Wow! O_O I didn't see that coming at all! I feel honored, and now I get to write up an actual story to this! Cool.
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# 10
02-05-2014, 02:15 AM
I'd say that this is pretty much, right up my alley
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