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# 11
03-04-2014, 09:25 PM
Yay, two more (or potentially more) weeks to get my #59 entry done!

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# 12
03-05-2014, 01:28 AM
Just to clarify, I put wrath of betazed into that thread because I was late getting an entry in. This thread will hopefully be something different lol. Ill have to go back and find a thread I havent done yet.
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# 13
03-05-2014, 02:03 AM
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Mine is up. Thoughts?
Doesn't conflict with the shenanigans I wrote for that event, so thumbs up
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# 14
03-05-2014, 02:51 AM
Right, mine's up. It's set after Academy Teachings (Talaina teaching cadets on the DarkFyre), but before the Viper is launched. Oh, and the start is set on a Monday morning, and ends on a Friday. Hence why it references next week, and then two weeks.



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I'll see if there's any more I can cobble out as well. Now I've played my Rommie alot more, may go back and do some Romulan stories.



EDIT: I see the rules say only 1 entry. The past redux's let us have multiple, for different LC's, so I shall assume the same applies here.
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# 15
03-05-2014, 06:01 AM
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Doesn't conflict with the shenanigans I wrote for that event, so thumbs up
Anything more specific?
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# 16
03-05-2014, 07:24 AM
Alright, mine's up. It's a redux of LC39: Lone Drone, in which I introduce the troubled character of the U.S.S. Victorious' Chief Engineer. Depending on what people think, I may add to it later. So... tell me what you think.
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# 17
03-05-2014, 07:40 AM
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Alright, mine's up. It's a redux of LC39: Lone Drone, in which I introduce the troubled character of the U.S.S. Victorious' Chief Engineer. Depending on what people think, I may add to it later. So... tell me what you think.


I liked it. Ryan seemed to have already made up his mind what course of action to take, but I enjoyed the short discussion of what to do with the drone, and the issues she was having in the present. I'd very much like to read more if you have it.
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# 18
03-05-2014, 07:44 AM
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I liked it. Ryan seemed to have already made up his mind what course of action to take, but I enjoyed the short discussion of what to do with the drone, and the issues she was having in the present. I'd very much like to read more if you have it.
I've only really recently started delving into the characters on the Victorious, in this challenge and the last one, but I'll definitely stick with it for a while.
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# 19
03-05-2014, 07:50 AM
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Alright, mine's up. It's a redux of LC39: Lone Drone, in which I introduce the troubled character of the U.S.S. Victorious' Chief Engineer. Depending on what people think, I may add to it later. So... tell me what you think.
Very nice! Tight, well-written. Up to your usual high standard.

Thoughts on mine?
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# 20
03-05-2014, 08:09 AM
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Very nice! Tight, well-written. Up to your usual high standard.

Thoughts on mine?
Only; has Three gone completely insane (more than usual)? She actually seems... nice! Too nice!

And then things go wrong. Yay, our regular, psychotic, living weapon is back!

Overall, a great, amusing, dark story.
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