I went about mine a bit differently. I think it looks pretty good in game with the parts I used. I debated long and hard about the facial texture, but in the end I decided that the coral looked better than smooth due to their rough and scaley appearance.
I started a thread over in the academy section specifically to garner feedback about the diff between saowin vs neck scales and thought I should link back to here as well since this is the ketracel white club!!