Lt. Commander
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# 1 How about this?
07-11-2010, 12:19 PM
This post, its a tune/poem. please read carfully.


Space... every where.

no Space, only space, Burgers alive on the window, They has no place.

Brains, eat them brains, only 10% meat, good brains.

no Space, only space, empty place gone mad.

Burgers eat the Brains, and then burn the remains of the place, in space.

Call headqurters, they eat the place, them Burgers will be left in space.

no Space, only space, empty place being eaten.

The com arry is down, well then fire all for the crown.

The place is going to hell, we'l leve no burger, Uneaten.

no Space, only space, were being eaten alive.

The hull is taking a beating, dont think of fleeting.

The core is over heatin, dont bother to mend, its THE END.

Every where, SPACE.
Lt. Commander
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# 2 :D
07-11-2010, 12:44 PM
Someone finally uses Ten Forward for poetry!

In any case, I like the rhyming meter.
Lt. Commander
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# 3
07-12-2010, 12:33 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Richard_Asimov
Someone finally uses Ten Forward for poetry!

In any case, I like the rhyming meter.
I wrote poetry.

I got shot down straight away.
Lt. Commander
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# 4
07-12-2010, 02:56 AM
You know, I wrote this to see if I can make peple laurph, I think it funney.
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