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# 1 Maquis Arisen
03-07-2011, 01:29 PM
The outer colonies of the Federation are once again being neglected because of war, leaving a small group of renegades to defend their our planets.
You must decide whether you will join them or stay true to Starfleet.
If you decide to follow, you will be led into Romulan space where civilians are being kidnapped by Hirogen forces for unknown reasons.

This mission uses the new foundry tools.
For anyone who's played my other missions (listed below) you know the story is still at the forefront though this mission has more combat than my usual RP missions.

This is for those interested in the Maquis way. Starfleet purists will not be able to finish the mission based on some of the moral decisions you will be forced to make. This mission lets you choose whether you will continue the mission or leave it.

The Maquis Arises Again!
Lt. Commander
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# 2
03-13-2011, 03:22 PM
Finally got this on Tribble after things weren't being published.

I also took the time to add quite a bit of content. A new man and secondary mission, plus a few things that aren't in the mission thread that also give background into the mission.

Love it if people tried it out and especially if they gave a solid review, plus any tips and things to change, add or remove.

Thanks in advance!
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# 3
03-17-2011, 02:58 PM
Updated the mission based on feedback from reviewers.

-Made the atmosphere easier to see and seperated enemies more.
-Changed some of the wording, though a full dialogue cleaning is coming soon
-Took out the instant attack on your ship (to let screen load first)
-Still haven't found a way of making the mission shorter, so I guess I'll just warn people here that the mission is not a quick fly-by.

PS- Thanks for everyone and they're awesome reviews, and the great ratings too!
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# 4
03-17-2011, 03:08 PM
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Originally Posted by SBCouto View Post
Updated the mission based on feedback from reviewers.

-Made the atmosphere easier to see and seperated enemies more.
-Changed some of the wording, though a full dialogue cleaning is coming soon
-Took out the instant attack on your ship (to let screen load first)

-Still haven't found a way of making the mission shorter, so I guess I'll just warn people here that the mission is not a quick fly-by.

PS- Thanks for everyone and they're awesome reviews, and the great ratings too!
Nice! I'll give it another try and adjust my review accordingly
Lt. Commander
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# 5
03-18-2011, 11:56 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by SBCouto View Post
Updated the mission based on feedback from reviewers.

-Made the atmosphere easier to see and seperated enemies more.
-Changed some of the wording, though a full dialogue cleaning is coming soon
-Took out the instant attack on your ship (to let screen load first)
-Still haven't found a way of making the mission shorter, so I guess I'll just warn people here that the mission is not a quick fly-by.

PS- Thanks for everyone and they're awesome reviews, and the great ratings too!
Excellent, I look Forward to playing through it again soon. Once you find your writing and design style, your popularity as an Author will be hard to beat. Not that I strive to be popular, but I do strive to make the best missions.
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