Lt. Commander
Join Date: Feb 2014
Posts: 180
I've published my first mission. An exploration format subtitled "The Snare"

Please check it out and provide feedback. I'm really interested to see how the hallway scene turns out for different players (I had mixed results while testing but I can't bring myself to gut it).

Many thanks to all of the great tutorials on StarbaseUGC. I watched all of them and they are an immense help to new authors. Also to Kirkfat and Markhawkman for their help in the forums.

The mission is in Review so you will need to search for it there.

Title: Explore Delta Volanis 4171C
Author: rekurzion
Level: 31+
Faction: Fed

Following Kirkfat's lead this is my attempt at recreating an exploration cluster mission and taking up the challenge to continue what he started with his Delta Volanis Missions 1 and 2. It should play around 30-40 minute.

Thank you.

Last edited by rekurzion; 08-07-2014 at 01:50 PM.
Lt. Commander
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# 2
07-30-2014, 09:43 PM
Made some spelling corrections and added a choice for the final scene.

Please check it out and let me know what you think.
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# 3
08-02-2014, 11:25 PM
Great stuff rekurzion! Really clever use of the foundry. And thanks for giving us choices to run or fight! Keep refining those dialogues. Grammar and spelling and such. This is spotlight material for sure!
Lt. Commander
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# 4
08-06-2014, 08:15 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by stratiar View Post
Great stuff rekurzion! Really clever use of the foundry. And thanks for giving us choices to run or fight! Keep refining those dialogues. Grammar and spelling and such. This is spotlight material for sure!
Thanks for the feedback. I'm curious, how did the 'hallway scene' work out for you?
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# 5
08-06-2014, 10:00 AM
Thanks for the reviews to those that played and the feedback, my mission is now out of review.

I'll be updating the hallway scene as its play isn't as consistant as I'd hoped (damned NPC's will do anything to get into the fight )
Lt. Commander
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# 6
08-07-2014, 01:50 PM
Updates

- more spelling corrections and general dialogue fixes
- modified hallway scene to ensure more consistant gameplay
Lt. Commander
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# 7
08-23-2014, 05:26 PM
Recent Reviews:

djxprime
Very nice! I think you gave an exploration experience that you couldn't get with the old exploration cluster missions.

Stradius
You really know your way around the Foundry! Nice work! Keep refining the dialogue text. This is spotlight material!

Hauriant
Long for exploration, but excellent. Has a good TOS feel that's still STO. Excellently eeire ground maps.

captainbella1219
Saw the post on the forums, great mission! A little tidying up here and there and this would be worthy of becoming a possible future spotlight. Again well done.




Thanks to all of the captains who have played and left reviews. Keep 'em coming!
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