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# 1 Mission Exchange
04-01-2011, 12:07 AM
I'll do yours, if you'll do mine.

Post your missions here and I'll run your missions, if you'll run mine in return.

Mine are:

The Orb Provides - Parts I & II

Honest feedback is desired and provided.

Thanks.
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# 2
04-01-2011, 10:27 AM
I tried to review yours but despite searching from every angle i could think of the missions are not popping up.
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# 3
04-01-2011, 02:09 PM
I've had that happen on a couple of other missions. If you log out and then log back in to STO, it usually fixes the problem.

Thanks.
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# 4 Market Crash
04-01-2011, 09:11 PM
I ran Market Crash. Very nice mission. I have a few suggestions. I didn't put them in the review, but I thought you might want them.

You need more waypoints. It's not always obvious where you need to go next.

I would not put the periods after the dialogue unless it's a whole sentence. I think it looks more professional. Just my opinion though.

But I did enjoy the mission.

Hopefully you can search for The Orb Provides and check out my missions.

Thanks.
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# 5
04-01-2011, 11:58 PM
I also found tonight that if you can't see the missions, try clicking the Review Content button and then see if the missions show in the listing.
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# 6
04-02-2011, 11:40 AM
Thanks for the review.

I managed to find and play part 1 of your mission. Good story and I like good stories. I left a few things in the review but wanted to throw out one thing here.

Gorn on P'Jem, considering how close it is to earth and vulcan, should have triggered every alarm in the quadrant. Some creative explanation might be in order. Other wise good job.
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# 7 More Mission Exchange?
04-17-2011, 03:19 PM
I'm still willing to run your missions, if you will run mine in return.

Mine are:

The Orb Provides - Part I
The Orb Provides - Part II

They are not really long, but I think have a decent story and good action.

You can also PM me at @mcornwell in game.

Thanks.
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# 8
04-17-2011, 10:58 PM
A great 2 part mission.

I would definitely recommend it. A good Trek story and good balance of story to action.

If anyone is interested give mine a try as well, I need reviews to go "live" - The Librarians
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# 9 The Librarians Review
04-18-2011, 12:00 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tranya-
A great 2 part mission.

I would definitely recommend it. A good Trek story and good balance of story to action.

If anyone is interested give mine a try as well, I need reviews to go "live" - The Librarians
A good mission. A bit on the action side and could use a little more fleshing out of the story, but a cool idea. Good basis for future missions at end. I enjoyed it and would recommend it.

Nice job. Thanks.
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# 10 Siege of YR318
04-18-2011, 02:01 PM
After about 12 hours of work over about a week I finished my first Foundry Mission.
Mission: Siege of YR318
Mission ID STHJSH6CJP
Faction: Federation

Description: Starfleet Intelligence has requested our help with a situation developing in Klingon Space.
Our covert monitering station in the Otha System has been discovered, and is under seige. Break the blockade and evacuate personnel.

http://starbaseugc.com/wiki/index.php/Siege_of_YR318

Feedback would be appreciated. Eventually it will get outta review state. - I should have some time to run your first part right now.

Cheers.
edit: I am actually going to run though tonight... my plans changed.
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