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My story is entitled "Cold Spell" [Post #2]. I may have steered slightly from the topic, but wanted to follow suit with such Trek episodes as TNG's "Samaritan Snare" and VOY's "Good Shephard," in which the Captain took crewmen out on shuttle missions for specific reasons. This seemed like a good opportunity to introduce the latest members to my crew, a Breen and a Reman (thanks to STO's reruns )
I'll be editing it as time goes on, so feel free to comment on what works and what doesn't. Offer suggestions and let me know of any typos and errors. Thanks.
I added my first draft. I'll be adding more to it after this migraine goes away. I'm basically telling the story as my main character saw it. I'm condiering the in-game text as written orders instead of spoken orders.