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# 21
08-17-2011, 10:38 AM
i just tweeted a reminder that there's still time left to participate in the Literary Challenge. I hope it helps get a few more stories in.
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# 22
08-17-2011, 11:43 AM
mine is ready

again its the continuation of my story. it may not make as much sense if you have not read the others, but you'll probably get the drift of it.
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# 23
08-17-2011, 01:25 PM
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Originally Posted by Captain_Revo
mine is ready

again its the continuation of my story. it may not make as much sense if you have not read the others, but you'll probably get the drift of it.
Yow.

Didn't see that coming.

I knew that the Undine Infiltrator was going to try to escape, but to kill a young Cadet and assume her form? Seems a little much to me.

I definitely hope that that Undine gets what it deserves, and that it gets it soon.
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# 24
08-17-2011, 03:45 PM
I wrote a second part of what must be something I've put too much thought into, I'm going to write a third part later, writing this much when your thinking it as you go along has burnt me out and I need a while to think up the rest.

I would appreciate any constructive criticism from people (flaming will be summarily ignored however).

Btw, Wishstone, I can't help but notice that the stories from Literary challenge 5 and 6 were still not up when last I checked, is everything alright there?
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# 25
08-18-2011, 02:00 AM
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Originally Posted by KiraYamato


Didn't see that coming.

that is what i was aiming for. anyone in my stories is fair game.
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# 26
08-18-2011, 06:44 PM
Revo, you have sucked me in with your ongoing storyline! Bravo! I hope to post mine soon but am very busy at work lately and I hurt my shoulder so I have not been ingame for awhile either.
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# 27
08-18-2011, 08:58 PM
Its 4AM, I posted the third part, i went over the character limit twice, excuse me, I shall go sleep now *crashes*
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# 28
08-18-2011, 09:11 PM
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Originally Posted by Blacksabre
Its 4AM, I posted the third part, i went over the character limit twice, excuse me, I shall go sleep now *crashes*
Fun story.

However, as soon as you wake up again, I suggest looking over what you wrote, because there were a few grammar and spelling errors there.
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# 29
08-21-2011, 09:46 AM
Well, I finally got around to finishing off and posting my STO Lit Challenge entry for #7: The Best and The Brightest.

This is my first entry in the challenge, and look forward to writing more. This one gave me a good chance to nut out the background history for my main toon. As it happened, Paul (my real life partner) was able to give me some fantastic feedback when he proofed it for me.
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# 30
08-21-2011, 10:05 PM
Behold, my second contribution to these literary challenges, "Making the Cut". An appropriate title for several reasons.

Since nobody has tried it so far, I figured I'd take a look at it from the Klingon angle. Or more precisely, from the Orion...
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